man, why can't studios make quality movies like THIS
man, why can't studios make quality movies like THIS
I'm trembling this is terrifying /j
I think this piece would have looked quite a bit better if you had given flippy some visible teeth. I think it makes me the slightest bit unsettled that there's none of those. If the background were somewhat shaded, I think that'd also make the piece. Overall quality is not bad, and certainly respectable, however. Keep it up.
Edit- I see your changes and am glad that some teeth were added! You did a great job on this piece and I hope to see more. I've looked through your art and see that you have quite a bit of potential, and I'd like to scout you sooner or later. I'd just need to see a few more truly awesome pieces before such a thing becomes reality.
I will take your advice into account and made some changes to it, thank you!
My favorite parappa quote <3
same, he spittin facts
Never regret getting carried away unless the extra details actually muddy up the drawing[which they don't even come close to doing]. Personally, I think it looks really good and that you didn't go overboard at all, but that little extra flare of detail accents this piece really well! If I were to nitpick, I'd say that the background, since it isn't nearly as detailed, doesn't fit with the piece and sort of clashes with the character and the elements surrounding them. Other than that, it looks great! :D
ay thanks! I admit I did rush the background a bit - they're not my strongest point LOL
terrifying
WOAAAA didn't even notice this got frontpaged, but it looks awesome! I especially love the way lumpy looks here with pointed antlers, never really thought of how he'd look from an almost top down angle, but it translates well!
frog :)
I would have given my opinion on this a lot earlier if it weren't for the fact that i haven't been able to sign on for two weeks or so >:T
But hey, better late than never! Might as well criticize now. I could actually understand whatever people were trying to say without reading "this" as "bhis", which is always a plus, good job on that. I really liked the part where Sanford fucking kills Deimos, that was actually kinda funny and clever! I noticed that this comic was a bit shorter than the others, which was not necessarily a bad thing considering the comedic approach you were going for. After all, you make a point, who expects to win a fight against someone who is both three times your size and actually competent? I also liked that you went for more of a fighting game aesthetic on this one, what with the text around the fight scenes.
In conclusion, I think that, while the previous page was a little bit more creative in the way the opponent was ko'd, I do think that this page is superior quality-wise. Keep it up! :D
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