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[Sparring, Part 2]

man, sequel's out! i really love this a lot, i sorta really like watching "a buncha pals beating the shit out of each other" kind of things. i absolutely love how doc has a tranquilizer specifically for hank's bs, that really got me. too bad hank's out and we don't get to see him beat the shit out of sanford and oc, but I digress. everything looks smooth and i could clearly make out characters and movements. i personally think there's no problem with wordiness, that just means that there's more to occupy you when reading. i mean, you're READING the comic, right? there has to be some kind of dialogue there. my only recommendation is to try to have minimal talking during the actual fight(so to make it more realistic(do you really wanna monologue while fistfighting someone?) and to not take up too much space in a page or panel), unless you want to cut to bystanders and spectators. you don't seem to have a problem remembering that, but just keep it in mind. overall, good job! :D

beemer0822 responds:

I've always been a little self conscious about how much dialouge I tend to cram into my comic pages, I just have a lot to say at once lol, so thank you for the reassurance! And also, a thank you for the suggestion to improve the actual combat panels, im certain that'll make this not only easier for me to draw but also improve the overall flow!!

[reredraw i guess???]

it looks really cool! i really love your style :D

[Sparring, Part 1]

This looked really good! As a person who can't draw panels OR fight scenes, you did wonderfully! Keep it up :D

[kissing]

Embrace the ship, my guy. Just embrace it.

[Director Phobos]

Man this looks awesome! He looks so badass i love it

[Phobos]

phobos my beloved <3

[Cringe Hank]

man, hank, wank, pank and crank
the quadfecta of hank-ness

[Nix]

I love your oc's design! It looks really cool and I'd love to see it more :D

[fuck it. madness combat oc art dump]

I like the oc designs! I especially like lazarus :D

flowersnax responds:

thank you!! i love drawing him :D

[Auditor]

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