nonever12345's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[pov you get murked in an alley]

Never regret getting carried away unless the extra details actually muddy up the drawing[which they don't even come close to doing]. Personally, I think it looks really good and that you didn't go overboard at all, but that little extra flare of detail accents this piece really well! If I were to nitpick, I'd say that the background, since it isn't nearly as detailed, doesn't fit with the piece and sort of clashes with the character and the elements surrounding them. Other than that, it looks great! :D

anguisavis responds:

ay thanks! I admit I did rush the background a bit - they're not my strongest point LOL

[Moar Disco Bear :3c]

Always appreciate even more disco bear art

Deerhead responds:

:)
Thankies

[handy]

the bottom right picture is so wholesome, I love it! and the style you went for is really nice and pleasing! keep it up :D

anguisavis responds:

AY thanks! I honestly wasn't too sure abt how the htf characters would translate into my style so it's cool to hear it works :D

[Remember your training. (Shitpost)]

you scare me good sir

Cheeriofluff responds:

i scare myself too don't worry its normal.

[Music Man]

there will never be enough disco bear art, you fill the empty void in my heart when it comes to disco bear art

Deerhead responds:

Glad to be in you services

[Lady Discotrescu]

Never has one photo invoked so many emotions within me
10/10

By your request, i will describe my feelings in 2 simple words:
Mostly lust/j

Deerhead responds:

If you please, could you describe these emotions that you feel?

[doomscrolling]

Love the art! Your style is so nice and soft and it's really cute! Twitter would be awfully extreme for flaky, but at least she's enjoying herself[for now]!

Diet-Heck responds:

Thanks thanks!!

Also yeah, she's gonna have to limit her social media use, that shit can be TOXIC..

[Sparring, Part 3]

You did a great job again! I personally thought that the second page was a little bit better in some aspects, though. Some words towards the beginning were a little hard to read because of the way that you write your ts. Using one singular line to make them rather than drawing a line straight down and then making another line to cross it makes them look like ds instead. I also noticed that you used a lot more punctuation and such in the previous page, which sort of makes it inconsistent because there's less of that here. You should stick to either using proper grammar on all pages, or being light on it. Other than that, I don't have any more suggestions! I did see you improve your drawings here compared to the last page, which was really cool! I like the way deimos KO's eb here, that was really creative and fun and I'd like to see something cool like that again! And the drawings here are so dynamic and full of energy and character, it's really great! And I'm glad you took the previous advice to heart, you had the perfect ratio of text to picture in the fight scenes! Keep it up!! :D

beemer0822 responds:

Thank you for the critiques! I'm aware of the whole handwriting thing, for some reason I developed a style that's this disgusting amalgamation of printing and cursive, and I always try to do regular printing when I'm writing comics, but sometimes I slip up and don't notice until I've finished everything. That's an issue that I'm still working on to conquer! And the punctuation thing, i genuinely didn't realize there was a change, so im highly grateful you pointed it out!

[sliced]

Wonderful art! I love the watercolor look to it, it's very pretty! Great job :D

GrimJimmy responds:

Heya thanks, nonever! :)